Hi, I would be writing about the progress of my theme topic endpoint security. I am done with my introduction which made use of two references. The first image was the progress of my introduction before it was reviewed by the teacher and the second image is the result after the corrections were implemented.
Image 1(Before correction)
Image 2(After correction)
your introduction seems clear and straight forward, make sure the structure of others are clear and links accordingly.
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